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| Issue 6 (Spring 2007) Contents Poems 1 - David R Morgan....... Addition 2 - Chris Major.............. Retch 3 - Alan Morrison.......... Obverbs 4 - Bob Rogers.............. Moules Frites 5 - Edward Nudelman.... Paragon of Polygon 6 - Joanna Ezekiel.......... In the Calligraphy and Painting Room Reviews 7 - Stephen Brown – Lateral Thinking: Paul Muldoon’s The End of the Poem and Horse Latitudes Notes on Contributors
-1- Addition For the child has hidden The bird in his desk And all the children Hear its song And all the children Hear the music And eight and eight in their Turn off they go And four and four in their Turn and two and two Fade away And one and one make Neither one nor two But one and one off they go And the lyre bird sings And the child sings And the teacher shouts When you’re quite finished Playing the fool But all the children Are listening to the music And the walls of the classroom Quietly crumble The window panes turn Once more to sand The ink is sea The desk is trees The chalk is cliffs And the feather In the ancient quill On display A bird again soaring skyward - David R Morgan
Retch
Life was unbearable. Constantly being stopped and questioned- "Where are you going?" "Where have you been?" Clothes vetted, mileage noted, life a minefield, any sudden explosion meaning days in sleeves and sunglasses. Worse was that patch of worn carpet, where made to stand night after night she faced a photograph of a white wedding, bride 'n' groom framed at the church mouth covered in thrown up rice..... - Chris Major
-3- Obverbs II Names No more need for anxiety and pain: Everything’s all right now it has a name. Sincerity Telling eyes Can’t tell lies. Gold & Silver We work all week for silver, yet at weekends drink gold to forget. The Past All that can last Is the past. Necessities I On necessities the Prophet said: Milk, coffee, toilet paper, bread. Immortality It’s a pity we won’t always be Around to enjoy immortality. Sophistry Sophistication was the age of Solon When the question mark was a semi-colon. Flaming June The crumpled lady barrels out while plodding by: “Where’s flaming June then? – and flamin' July?” August 24th 2006 Holst was correct, after all, with his octo: today they stripped planetary status from Pluto! DIY-ity A society of Do-It-Yourself and every man for his shelf The Grey I had a shelf lined with Tolkien books; glimpsed Gandalf in my father’s looks. Poet Carve your niche on a shelf; Sell your soul to yourself. - Alan Morrison
-4- Moules Frites
The café stinks of the seaside we sit outside basking in intermittent sun, warm and then a chill from the sea.
The mussels arrive hot and steaming promising the taste of salt.
My first memory Of mussels was in a dark midlands pub, opposite a church but no place for saints.
Pickled in jar The bi-valve looked more like a medical specimen taken from a dusty shelf.
An old man at my shoulder whispered that a woman told him that that the creature reminded her of her sex she had viewed from a mirror.
The long dark edged lips and the protuberant flesh and the taste of salt secured this double image in my mind.
In bright sun I open the treasure and take the taste with my tongue. - Bob Rogers
-5- Paragon of Polygon Long before it was ever settled which way things would go, there were always patterns coming in and out of focus through an unpredictable lens. Rude, blunt, fickle in every way, these signs and sculptures posed and passed for real things, appeared and reappeared as ancient archetype, as paragon. Were we prescient, or rather ignorant? Were the holes in the hassock, run through by a child’s screw driver or by a pile driver, that popped and mocked guttural sounds with every thrust (like punching holes in bloated sheep)? Were they holes, or the deep ravines where we played our games of war. Not long after it all made sense, when the integers responded to rule (the ceremonial doubling of twos—ad infinitum), there followed a vague apprehension as shapes began to form from shapes, lines into right angles, finally, an approved algorithm handed down for us: two raised to its highest power. But four-thousand and ninety-six is about as high as I can go, at night, in bed, with all the glut of steel and architecture in my brain; warm April rain gives way to a longitudinal wind, greenish sea to perpendicular blue, long parallel waves to longer parallel tides, all bound by edge and angle, bound by polygon. These patterns fill my mind, filled it then and fill it now, patterns in the pounding in and patterns in the pounding out. The shapely body, the misshapen limb, flesh or birch. The corners remain protracted only by degree. Length and breadth have coalesced, in the end as shapely beauty, as paragon of polygon. - Edward Nudelman
-6- In the Calligraphy and Painting Room The combination of painting and poetry within the same work. (Booklet for the
- Joanna Ezekiel
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Lateral Thinking: Paul Muldoon’s The End of the Poem and Horse Latitudes. Paul Muldoon would probably drool over the kinds of coincidences noted in the history of American presidents, especially between Lincoln and Kennedy. These have often been recounted but here is a brief summary. Abraham Lincoln was killed in Ford's Theatre; John F. Kennedy was killed riding in a In his discussion of Auden, Muldoon writes, ‘It seems to me that all reading is, to a greater or lesser extent, involved with speculation on what’s going on, consciously or unconsciously in the writer’s mind, just as all writing is involved with speculation on what’s going on, consciously or unconsciously, in the reader’s mind.’ Indeed speculation, some would say wild speculation, is at the heart of these lectures and Muldoon delights in allowing words to take him on a journey, the end of which is always promised and indefinitely postponed. Whether discussing Frost, Bishop, Arnold or Auden, you get the impression that these chapters were written by a man who is either in a library or in the office next door, who will run across to consult Spanish or Italian dictionaries, poets' biographies, the multi-volumed OED, or his trusty Encyclopaedia Britannica. At times he seemed to be opening the biographies of his poets, turning to the index and searching for any mention of Helen Vendler objects to Muldoon's ‘untenable inferences’ and the ‘subliminal presences’. One such example is when Charles Darwin stands as a ghostly presence in ‘ Muldoon gets to his points by circuitous routes and we must imagine him delivering these ‘stunt readings’, as he calls them, with tongue firmly planted in cheek. The whimsical readings are often entertaining. They highlight the fact that readers open up poems in all sorts of ways. He seems to be saying that we should have more fun with poems, that we should read them and re-make them in our own image. That’s certainly what he does and his comments are nothing less than we’d expect from a poet known for his verbal fireworks, a poet variously described as a riddler, a shape-shifter, disorienting, exhilarating, cheeky, oblique, a Puck of contemporary poetry.
The attempts to stick his neck out and deal more overtly with contested literary issues are less successful. For example, in the discussion of Bishop’s ’12 O’Clock News’, he tries to address the point at which the poem ‘stops being verse and becomes prose’. Two pages before, he referred to I. A. Richards’ tenor and vehicle definition of metaphor as ‘a shaggy dog story.’ He then goes on to pinpoint the very word where Bishop’s poem ceases to be poetry and becomes prose: ‘It happens somewhere between the end of the third sentence and the beginning of the fourth, almost certainly between the word “dead” and “visibility”’. Muldoon’s criteria for whether a poem is verse or prose is whether or not it can be translated into verse by chopping up the lines wherever he sees fit. This is unsatisfying, at best a shaggy dog story of Muldoon’s own. It should draw a wry smile from his audience. The lectures are a mixture of great leaps of interpretation and detailed close reading. In the lecture on Lowell’s ‘George III’, while discussing the word ‘poor’, he says, ‘I’m sent back, however, to three other occasions on which Lowell uses the word “poor” as the opening word of a poem.’ This is where the reader will accelerate, racing ahead to the ever-receding point, or to the page where Muldoon takes up another thread. These threads are traced subliminally, reading between or below the lines, and also through near versions and crypto-currents and Freudian ‘verbal bridges’. They allow Muldoon to take his interpretations in all sorts of unusual directions. The tenuous connections, however, can at times appear arbitrary. Muldoon is aware of the 'hazardous' nature of speculations on an author's intentions and sees this as giving him free reign for his own apparently outlandish insights. He invokes Baudrillard as justification, pointing to the fact that such word play ‘allow[s] the pure materiality of language to show through’. By the time you get to the lecture on Auden, you just know Muldoon is going to find echoes of that Aud- part of the name in all sorts of places. Indeed, it crops up in the poem title "Aubade", in By the final chapter Muldoon can take this method for granted. Heaney’s ‘A Brigid’s Girdle’ is dedicated to Adele Dalsimer. We are given the lines, ‘I heard the mocking bird / And a delicious, articulate / Flight of small plinkings from a dulcimer’. Muldoon then tells us that ‘dulcimer’ rhymes with Dalsimer, but leaves out any mention of the given name in ‘A delicious’. It is as if by now he doesn’t have to point out the subliminal references. In that last chapter three poems are tackled in succession. This perhaps is the weakest part, without the time to develop his reading and extend the references. I for one would have liked to have heard more on the Heaney poem. The final paragraph is also less than satisfactory, which is not entirely out of kilter with a book about open ends. In those The collection is pervaded by death. This is one of the reasons for the reference in the title to the area known as the doldrums. Whether it is the dedication to Muldoon’s sister or the poems where he recalls dead friends and relatives, intimations of mortality are implied in the loss of others. There is a high body count in this book, especially in the title sequence, a kind of potted history of warfare, refracted through battles starting with the letter b, refracted again through the dying ‘Carlotta’ (with her grandfather’s enigmatic utterings from the sidelines), and refracted once more through the many instances where horses are used as an instrument of war. It has been noted that the battles hint at a missing Rather than give an overview of the collection, it may be worth using the example of the ‘rodeo reading’ of The End of the Poem, attempting, as it were, a Muldoonian reading of a Muldoon poem. ‘ I crouched in my own Little Ease by the pool at the Vanderbilt where Carlotta crouched, sputter-sput, just as she had in the scanner when the nurse, keen-sighted as a lanner, picked out a tumor like a rabbit scut on dark ground. It was as if a fine silt, white sand or silicate, had clogged her snorkel, her goggles had fogged, and Carlotta surfaced like flot to be skimmed off some great cast-iron pot as garble is skimmed off, or lees painstakingly drained by turnings and tilts from a man-size barrel or butt. Like Muldoon sitting in his office, surrounded by reference books, the reader must show a little initiative here. The internet might also be of help. This way, you can easily discover that the Battle of Brandywine was a disastrous episode for the Americans in the Revolutionary War. The battle took place, significantly enough, on 11th September 1777. The opening salvoes were fired when the British came upon an American reconnaissance party in a saloon. The Americans immediately retreated out the back door, leaving their horses tied up at the front. We should remember at this point that the Horse Latitudes are so-called because sailors notoriously threw horses overboard to make progress through the becalmed waters. So the start of the Even before the initial skirmishes of this battle, the horses had already suffered. The British troops travelled for thirty-four days before landing near The opening of the poem finds the speaker crouched in ‘Little Ease’. A quick internet search will tell you that this was the name of a notorious cell, 1.2 metres square, in the Carlotta’s tumour is identified on the scan by a nurse who is ‘keen sighted as a lanner’. The lanner is a female falcon. The mention of any falcon in a poem is likely to remind the reader of Yeats’s apocalyptic image in ‘The Second Coming’. Yeats’s gyres, the analogy for a cyclical theory of history, chimes neatly with the framework of repetitive battles. Carlotta and the speaker of the poem sit by the pool of the Vanderbilt hotel in One would presume Muldoon was thinking of ‘flotsam’ here. The word ‘flot’ points up the relation of the root word to both ‘flotilla’ and ‘fleet’, reminding us again of the fleet that sailed up the Yeats hovers in the background of this poem in the same way that Pound or Aldington loiter behind the H.D. poem. The tumour that turns up, or Carlotta, who emerges from the pool, are like the lees drained off the wine in a barrel. The mention of lees here sends us back to the first Oxford lecture in The End of the Poem where the ghost word ‘lees’ conjures up the figure of George Hyde-Lees and sends Muldoon off to Keats’s Nightingale. Keats’s ‘dull opiate’ makes him sink into Lethe. Carlotta rises out of the Vanderbilt pool but will eventually sink into the opiates of palliative care. George Hyde-Lees is behind Yeats’s ceremonial sharing of wine with the dead on All Souls’s Night and Muldoon’s poem, entitled ‘ The ‘turnings and tilts’ of Muldoon’s poems only serve to remind us that, while they might appear ‘a tad impenetrable’ at times, a little research can open up various alternative readings. It will always be up to the reader to decide whether, when it comes to Muldoon’s allusive and elusive poems, the ends justify the effort it takes to unravel them. I doubt whether this book will come to be seen as vintage Muldoon, but as always, there are poems here - The Old Country and Eggs among them - that are up there with his finest and there are poems that are perplexing and apparently impenetrable enough to keep the avid Muldoonian guessing until the next collection comes around. Horse Latitudes Publisher: Faber and Faber (Oct 2006) ISBN-10: 0571232345 ISBN-13: 978-0571232345 The End of the Poem Publisher: Faber and Faber (Oct 2006) ISBN-10: 0571227406 ISBN-13: 978-0571227402 - Stephen Brown
Joanna Ezekiel lives and works in Chris Major lives in David R Morgan teaches in Alan Morrison had his first selection of poetry published in Don't Think of Tigers (The Do Not Press, 2001). Since then he has appeared in numerous poetry magazines and has had chapbooks published by Sixties Press and Waterloo Press. His recent collection, The Mansion Gardens, was nominated for the 2006 T S Eliot Prize. Edward Nuldeman is a graduate of the Bob Rogers was born in Staffordshire, and is now living and teaching in |
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